PORCELAIN AND PINKA 4-page comic script by Ayal Pinkus.
Revision Mon Sep 18 11:15:48 CEST 2017.
Lois wants Julie to get out of the bath because she wants to prepare for a date, but Julie is not in a mood to do her sister a favor...
Based on a play by F. Scott Fitzgerald.
This script is released under the Creative Commons Attribution 4.0 International Public License , which means artists are allowed to modify and use this script without having to pay a fee.
STORY OVERVIEWThis takes place during the roaring 20s.
PAGE ONE - THREE PANELS
PANEL ONE (010_010)
Establishing shot of a Victorian style house.
PANEL TWO (010_020)
Julie is bathing herself in a small clawfoot bath. She is humming. Above her is an opened window. People who look through the window can't see her bathing. The room looks like a regular room with wooden floor, not like our modern bath rooms.
PANEL THREE (010_030)
Lois has walked in. She is standing at the doorway carrying clean clothes and a towel.
PAGE TWO - FOUR PANELS
PANEL ONE (020_010)
Lois is standing at the doorway looking at Julie who is taking a bath. Julie doesn't seem to be in a hurry, and Lois seems to be getting nervous and apprehensive. She realizes she's at her sister's mercy.
PANEL TWO (020_020)
Julie is taking her time washing herself gracefully.
PANEL THREE (020_030)
Julie's hand splatters water from the tap.
PANEL FOUR (020_040)
Lois has pulled the door so that it protects her from the splash of water Julie had directed toward her. She's clearly angry and leaving.
PAGE THREE - FIVE PANELS
PANEL ONE (030_010)
Julie is laughing out loud.
PANEL TWO (030_020)
Mr. Calkins stands at the window, looking in. From his point of view, the room looks like a regular room. He can't see Julie in the bath.
PANEL THREE (030_030)
Julie lets out a shriek as the male voice that came through the window catches her by surprise.
PANEL FOUR (030_040)
Mr. Calkins speaking.
PANEL FIVE (030_050)
Julie is looking at her body.
PAGE FOUR - FIVE PANELS
PANEL ONE (040_010)
Lois has walked back into the bathroom.
PANEL TWO (040_020)
Mr. Calkins is peeking into the room and he has a surprised look on his face.
PANEL THREE (040_030)
Lois faints, dropping her clean clothes and towel.
PANEL FOUR (040_040)
The window, but now with Mr. Calkins missing.
PANEL FIVE (040_050)
Julie reaches for the towel her sister dropped.