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GOING PLACES

A 5-page comic script by Ayal Pinkus.

Revision Mon Sep 18 11:15:47 CEST 2017.
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A pickpocket has a surprise coming her way...

This script is released under the Creative Commons Attribution 4.0 International Public License , which means artists are allowed to modify and use this script without having to pay a fee.

SYNOPSIS

A short wordless comic.

A man in suit grabs a beer at the airport while waiting for his flight. A beautiful woman in pencil dress flirts with him, then walks away. He turns to find his carry-on suitcase is stolen. The police catch the woman outside the airport with her partner in crime, who has his carry-on suitcase. The man in suit holds up a badge. He's with the police and he was their bait and now he arrests them.

PAGE ONE - FOUR PANELS

PANEL ONE (010)

Establishing shot: an airport.

PANEL TWO (020)

A Man In Suit looks at the time table at the airport.

PANEL THREE (030)

The Man In Suit looks at his watch.

PANEL FOUR (040)

The Man In Suit is pulling along a carry-on suitcase as he is strolling toward a bar inside the airport.

PAGE TWO - THREE PANELS

PANEL ONE (050)

The Man In Suit is standing at the bar and taking a sip of a pint of beer as he looks sideways at something tha attracts his attention.

PANEL TWO (060)

A beautiful Woman In Pencil Dress. poses and looks at him defiantly, flirting, as if inviting to hit on her.

PANEL THREE (070)

He smiles at her, a gentle nod by way of a greet, his glass raised as if saying he wants to buy her a drink.

PAGE THREE - FOUR PANELS

PANEL ONE (070)

She is turning away, looking over her shoulder seductively.

PANEL TWO (080)

She is walking away, into the indoor crowd at the airport.

PANEL THREE (090)

He is finishing his glass in a rush, poised to go after her.

PANEL FOUR (100)

He has turned and discovered his carry-on suitcase is gone (indicated through a ghost image of the suitcase maybe?).

PAGE FOUR - THREE PANELS

PANEL ONE (100)

He's in the airport main area, looking around, trying to find her.

PANEL TWO (100)

Outside the airport, we look over the shoulder of a person who on a walkie-talkie as he looks at The Woman in Pencil Dress walk out with a Young Kid who is pulling along the carry-on suitcase.

PANEL THREE (100)

The Woman in Pencil Dress and The Young Kid handcuffed, standing by a police car, police standing behind them.

PAGE FIVE - THREE PANELS

PANEL ONE (100)

The Man In Suit approaches.

PANEL TWO (100)

The Man In Suit is holding up a police badge with a smile on his face.

PANEL THREE (100)

The Man In Suit is leading the Woman in Pencil Dress toward a police car, the carry-on suitcase in his other hand.

THE END