FUNDAMENTALSA 11-page comic script by Ayal Pinkus.
Revision Fri Nov 10 17:22:33 CET 2017.
A veteran burglar is opening a safe when a young fellow burglar attacks him and takes off with the loot. A few days later, the veteran burglar corners the young colleague.
This script is released under the Creative Commons Attribution 4.0 International Public License , which means artists are allowed to modify and use this script without having to pay a fee.
PAGE ONE - FOUR PANELS
PANEL ONE (010_010)
Establishing shot of a busy main street in a big city, in front of a warehouse.
PANEL TWO (010_020)
A Young Kid is standing on the sidewalk trying to hail a cab.
PANEL THREE (010_030)
Vinny is looking hopeful as a cab nears (off-panel).
PANEL FOUR (010_040)
Joe is driving a cab and is seeing Vinny through his window and is staring and steering toward him.
PAGE TWO - FIVE PANELS
PANEL ONE (020_010)
The cab has stopped next to Vinny, the door is open and Vinny is getting into the cab.
PANEL TWO (020_020)
Vinny is sitting on the back seat of the cab and he is looking away, bored.
PANEL THREE (020_030)
The doors have just locked and he looks alarmed.
PANEL FOUR (020_040)
Vinny is looking at the driver, Joe, who is looking sideways in such a way that Vinny can see his face.
PANEL FIVE (020_050)
The eyes of Joe in the rearview mirror.
PAGE THREE - FIVE PANELS
PANEL ONE (030_010)
A mansion in the distance against a sky, the night is falling.
PANEL TWO (030_020)
Joe is crouching behind a bush. He is looking at the mansion. He is wearing a ski mask on his head, it's not covering his face yet.
PANEL THREE (030_030)
Joe is looking sideways as he comes from behind the bush, his hands on his ski mask, poised to pull it over his face. He is moving in the direction of the mansion.
PANEL FOUR (030_040)
The ski mask now covers the face of Joe. Joe is disabling an alarm with some high-tech gear.
PANEL FIVE (030_050)
He is entering though a window, cracked open with tools he's still holding.
PAGE FOUR - SIX PANELS
PANEL ONE (040_010)
Joe is kneeling at a safe.
PANEL TWO (040_020)
Joe is using hearing tools and such to open the safe.
PANEL THREE (040_030)
Joe is opening the safe.
PANEL FOUR (040_040)
Joe is kneeling in front of the safe and holding stacks of money bills.
PANEL FIVE (040_050)
Joe is hit over the head by Vinny.
PANEL SIX (040_060)
PAGE FIVE - SIX PANELS
PANEL ONE (050_010)
Joe lies on the floor, unconscious.
PANEL TWO (050_020)
The eyes of Joe are opened slightly.
PANEL THREE (050_030)
Joe is getting up.
PANEL FOUR (050_040)
Joe is standing in front of the safe, sad, defeated.
PANEL FIVE (050_050)
The safe is empty! Just one note lies inside.
PANEL SIX (050_060)
Joe's hand is holding the note. The note says "You're getting old."
PAGE SIX - SIX PANELS
PANEL ONE (060_010)
Joe is Still holding the note off-panel. He is looking sideways. He is hearing a roaring sound outside.
PANEL TWO (060_020)
He has lunged toward a window, and is standing there and staring out.
PANEL THREE (060_030)
Joe is looking down onto the street at a guy on a motor cycle.
PANEL FOUR (060_040)
It is Vinny on a bike with a big grin on his face. He is waving with his helmet, his other hand holding the handlebars.
PANEL FIVE (060_050)
Vinny now has his helmet on and he is waving.
PANEL SIX (060_060_double)
Joe looks on through the window as the motor cycle is racing away into the morning sun.
PAGE SEVEN - SEVEN PANELS
PANEL ONE (070_010)
Vinny's appearance reflected through the rearview mirror as he sits in the back of the cab.
PANEL TWO (070_020)
Vinny looks at the locked door again.
PANEL THREE (070_030)
Vinny looks defiantly at Joe.
PANEL FOUR (070_040)
A smile forms on Joe's lips.
PANEL FIVE (070_050)
Vinny is studying the door lock.
PANEL SIX (070_060)
PANEL SEVEN (070_070)
A look of disbelief on Vinny's face.
PAGE EIGHT - SIX PANELS
PANEL ONE (080_010)
The dialogue carries the story on this page, so please feel free to draw panels relating to the characters and the insides of a cab, making it visually diverse and interesting for the reader to look at.
PANEL TWO (080_020)
PANEL THREE (080_030)
PANEL FOUR (080_020)
PANEL FIVE (080_040)
PANEL SIX (080_050)
PAGE NINE - SIX PANELS
PANEL ONE (090_010)
The story on this page is again carried by the dialogue so here also feel free to come up with diverse and varying visuals for the panels.
PANEL TWO (090_020)
PANEL THREE (090_030)
PANEL FOUR (090_040)
Vinny sits silent for a moment as he contemplates this concept.
PANEL FIVE (090_050)
PANEL SIX (090_060)
Joe looks sideways at Vinny who has look of disbelief on his face.
PAGE TEN - FIVE PANELS
PANEL ONE (100_010)
Vinny is looking away, he is thinking.
PANEL TWO (100_020)
Vinny looks at Joe, apprehensive as he's afraid and doesn't know what he's getting himself into, also with a touch of curiosity.
PANEL THREE (100_030)
Joe is grinning into the rearview mirror.
PANEL FOUR (100_040)
Joe is pulling away the car, turning the wheel as the car is driving off.
PANEL FIVE (100_050)
The cab is slowly rolling off into the distance along a meandering road.
PAGE ELEVEN - FOUR PANELS
PANEL ONE (110_010)
Establishing shot of a futuristic cityscape. A hovering vehicle as the focal point.
PANEL TWO (110_020)
Vinny is an older distinguished gentleman now with gray hair. He sits comfortable leaned forward on the backseat of a self-driving car. He is facing the rear view.
PANEL THREE (110_030)
A young kid sitting opposite him, contemplating the offer. He's uncomfortable, he seems as if he is trying to sink into his seat.
PANEL FOUR (110_040)
Vinny's wide smile.